Thanks for the palette.

Commander:"Fire! Take 'em down in one shot!"
Soldier:"Burn!"
The Soldier lets off a burst of fire, and having mentally prepared himself and at this range, they all strike the oncoming enemy. The commander wastes no time in defending the life of his friends, firing off once again just one shot. It strikes the robot square in the eye and punches clean through it's frame, tearing steel and frying circuits as it flies off to the left.
Commander:"That's how you do it boys!"
Meanwhile, a small squad of elites rush into the bottom of the building. They come face to face with a lone robot.
Elite #1(Green eye, pink energy gun):"There's one! Do we shoot?"
Elite #2(Red eye, back of the pack):"Target marked. Unknown mechanical lifesigns and sentience detected. Threat level: Minimal."
Elite Commander:(Out front, slightly taller, girl):"I'll give you 3 seconds to get out of my sight or I will blast you to scrap!"

Drone 6-B takes too much damadge and blows up. Drone A-183 absorbs most of the shots he took and fires his focus laser at the robot commander while the Drone Leader charges his on the floor below. Two drone scouts appear near the water and three drop pods fire towards the beach.
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Drop pod threat level:OH SHI-  (But the units inside have a threat level of 5/10
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two of the drop pods blow up but the one closest to the building survives.



my units

You can use PMs for that sort of thing.

Ya, he's at my house, about to play some motor storm: APOCALYPSE! and possibly some portal 2 mixed in with some dwarf fortress :D

cool. Ill post my move


Drone A-183 blows up and the floor gives way above the elites. The drone leader falls to the ground but doesnt blow up.
Drone Scout Commander:Drone leader has been disabled. Engineer, fix him up.
Drone Enginner:Roger sir.
The drone walker cant talk so he continues to advance.
Drone Scout B-18:Scout Commander, I must inform you there are 5 hostiles. Do you think we can kill them?
Drone Scout Commander:We can if we have an engineer.Engineer, crate spotted on top of the structure. I have a feeling there are some supplies in it. Retreive them and build what you can
Drone Engineer:Yes commander
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(05-15-2011 06:06 PM)wowisgod617 link Wrote:  Ya, he's at my house, about to play some motor storm: APOCALYPSE! and possibly some portal 2 mixed in with some dwarf fortress :D

I see you are new. Welcome to the PW forums!

The Trio notice the rubble as it comes down. The Commander casually steps out of the way, as does the other one. Unfortunately, the Elite at the back of the pack wasn't fast enough with his cool-person walk, and is struck by falling debris. It sends him skidding to just nearly offscreen.
Elite #2:"Damage detected to 90% of frame. Recommend discontinued combat."
Elite Commander:"Get back to the APC. I'm damn sure I can take on a bunch of half-assed robots."
Elite #2:"Order received. Now enacting."
She stares down at the machine she riddled earlier.
Elite Commander:"He he heh... I could just kill you now, but that'd be too good for something like you. I think i'll send you back to the lab boys and have them rip you apart, piece by piece."
Elite #1:"Heh. They'll have a field day with something like you. Anyway, I'll cover the door. He's not alone, not with that crash I heard outside."
Elite Commander:"You go do that. Command, this is Rain."
High Command:"This is command, we read you Rain."
Rain:"I have an... object of interest... Here and I'm gonna need a pickup."
High Command:"We copy. Dispatching a Dropship to your location, over. ETA, 10 minutes at most."
Meanwhile, on the upper floor...
Soldier:"Oh my god his whole head is gone!"
Engineer:"Oh god why him?!? That bullet was for me wasn't it?!?"
Soldier:"Can't you fix him up?"
Engineer:"I don't know! I've never seen damage this bad before!"
Soldier:"We can't just leave him here! Come on do something!"
The new combat drone flies off to somewhere not as depressing.

Also, I think I deleted one of my turns. I have the image here if you need it.

The engineer drone proceeds to the box ontop of the building
Scout Drone commander:Drone B-473, engage hostiles. Divert all energy to attack mode
Scout drone B-18:Sir, I linked to drone leaders mainframe, he can be fixed. His word processor is still operational so I linked to it. The hostiles are planning on bringing him to a lab? Thheir evac will be here in about 10 minuets. Options?
Scout Drone commander:Don't let them take him. If you fail, I get your parts.
Scout drone B-18:Roger that commander.
They advance.

why is the walker thing stuck in the sand, if its a 3D thing it doesn't fit PW, please change it to 2D

Rain picks up the drone and straps it to her back. It's safer that way. The damaged Elite drags himself back to the APC and gets inside.
Rain:"Don't worry. From what i've been told, your technology is too primitive for you to feel pain. So when they strip you down to nothing, it'll be like it never even happened."
Elite #1:"What's that noise outside... it sounds like a laser charging up..."
Rain:"Don't fret, you've been through worse! Remember those black blob-looking things that just came in endless swarms?"
Elite #1:"...Don't remind me of those things. There was no end to them..."
The combat drone floats down to check out a new group of 'bots.
Meanwhile, upstairs...
Soldier:"Is he gonna be alright?"
Engineer:"I don't know! I just need to work in peace for a bit!"
Soldier:"Wish granted!"
The soldier passes the Engineer and pops off a few shots through the window at yet another machine.

Thanks for telling me tyrus. I didn't notice.

Scout drone commander:Good shot. Im expecting some enemy attacks, divert all power to defense system.
Drone Engineer:They have about 8 minuets untill their evac arrives!
scout drone commander: Careful! You don't want to damadge drone leader!
Scout Drone B-18:I think he already destroyed his mainframe. Oh wait that AND everything else.
Scout drone commander:Oh well this changes our entire tactic.
Scout drone B-18:I callhis spare parts!!!
Scout drone leader:damnit!

Rain bolts for the roof, realizing that her cargo can't take too many more hits. The sound of a truck engine can be heard offscreen. The final Elite takes the shot straight to the face, but doesn't go down.
Elite #1:"IT'LL TAKE A LOT MORE THAN THAT TO KILL ME!"
He and the drone both fire in unison. The drone fires off a few regular rounds, while the Elite fires a disruptor cannon. It punches clean through the walker drone, disrupting it's circuitry and punching through. The energy dissipates into the drop pod's armor.
Upstairs, the Soldier prepares to take a stand to save his last friend.
Soldier:"I don't think we're making it out of this alive. It's gonna take a miracle! Yellow, tell them I died fighting!"
Engineer:"No not you too! Don't leave me here to die!"

Last post for this night.

Same.
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It looks like the elite commander is leading. It would make a pretty cool PW if the map changes.

The walker drone starts to charge up purple energy. It looks like it can absorb hostile weaponry!
Scout Drown Leader:This is for calling us scrap metal!
Scout Drone B-18:Ah! I'm gonna die! It was nice serving you commander.
Scout Drone Commander:Nice commanding you B-18.

The Elite stores his weapon in his INFINITE BACKPACK. How do we make them? Easy! You just (classified info). After that, he pulls out a laser sword (Not a lightsaber, seriously it's not) and charges at the walker.
Elite #1:"ABSORB THIS!"
The Drone floats up and away, anticipating something big coming. The engine sound increases, almost as if it's accelerating... Shortly after that, the sound of a wall coming down is heard. Hooooooooo boy.
Upstairs, The Commander gets back up, having had his head put back together.
Commander:"What... what happened?"
Engineer:"It's a long story. But right now we have to get out of here!"
Soldier:"I'll hold this guy off! Just go! I'll catch up!"
He pops off a few more shots, one of them drilling through the wall and hitting it's mark on the other side.
Rain pops in on the upper level.
Rain:"Let's go boys! Dropship's coming in 5 minutes and I won't wait up if you don't get on!"
Commander and Engineer: "Yes m'am!"

Sorry for late reply.

Scout Drone B-18 blows up violently sending more of the wall flying towards the robots.
Scout Drone Commander:Engineer, hows it going up there?
Drone Engineer:Scanning the box. It contains some rockets? Also on my LONG trip, I overheard that the hostiles will be leaving in about 5 minuets.
Scout Drone Commander:Land or air?
Drone Engineer:I think a gunship is picking them up.
Scout Drone CommanderOh perfect.

Copy pasted splosions aren't a very good idea mind you.

Err I don't mean to be a total trouble maker here, but compare the drone effects to Bikkel's balls http://picturewars.net/smf/index.php?topic=84.0. You'll never get better if you don't make your own stuff..

I'm working on some but I wanted to use something else while I worked. Ill replace them once they are finished. Sorry!
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Laser is finished. Moving on to some explosions.

It's allright, just credit people if you use their stuff as placeholders :)

Credit to Bikkels and Mouse for their awesome effects!

(05-17-2011 06:44 PM)Agent10361 link Wrote:  Laser is finished. Moving on to some explosions.

The idea is to sprite them during the match, as opposed to having pre-sprited stuff...

Ok I'll try that and see how it works. Im glad that everyone is helping me! :tophat:

The Elite has his head blown off and his body destroyed. The sword jams itself into the ground, with his hand and attached arm still holding onto it. Also, an APC just came onscreen. It flattens the debris and makes a beeline for the outside hostiles. It's not slowing down for ANYTHING!
Elite #2:"New mission: Avenge Friend. Method of choice: Vehicular roboticide."
Fitting Music for Elite #2's last stand:
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The trio upstairs start to bolt for the stairway.
Commander:"You deserve a medal, Engineer."
Engineer:"How about an early retirement?"
Soldier:"Heh..."
The building shakes slightly, as bits and pieces of the walls fall off. It can't take many more hits...

I somewhat have a feeling your going to win.

Drone Engineer:Commander, the warheads are armed. I see the hostile dropship about a mile away. My sensors detect a strong electronic signal coming from it.
Scout Drone Commander:Could be nothing. How heavy are the warheads?
Drone Engineer:Very.
Scout Drone Engineer:High command, this is recon unit A-276. Send a heavy drone immidately. Long range combat.
High command:Sending one long range heavy unit to your location now. ETA 1 minuet.
Scout Drone Commander:Thankyou high command, Unit A-276, out

No such thing.

I don't really understand what you mean there...