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The thread to help Mr. F with his art!/ Mr. F's Art (eventually)
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The thread to help Mr. F with his art!/ Mr. F's Art (eventually)

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Is the river worth it?

Problems I know of:
Unbalanced composition, planning to add lightning coming from the angel person
Lots of messy lines
Un-AA-ed lines
Fix crappy rocket trails from the trucks
Add the rest of rocket effects
Fix up messed up hills from adding the river

Please just C+C away.
06-30-2013 04:28 AM
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I like that one with river more, maybe add pipes flooding it with pollution on "bad" side or something.

Personally i would remove trail from first truck and explosions too, make it launch rockets or something.

And i don't totally get that "shield" thing above "good" city. I mean why smoke is coming from it? And i dislike that it's 2D while everything else is more 3D.

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06-30-2013 04:41 AM
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I like the one with the river more.
06-30-2013 01:09 PM
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Blerg

Got rid of the hills for right now, they looked like shit I'm going to redraw them though. I messed with the river some added a reflection as well. I also made the shield different and I think it looks better.

I think I'm going to keep the larger rocket truck because I like it  :v: .

I think the only fundamental stuff to add left are the hills, and then some lightning  :suicide: . Then only aa!
07-01-2013 03:25 AM
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I like that. I like it a lot.

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07-01-2013 07:58 PM
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Walter Sobchak!
07-19-2013 03:04 PM
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07-19-2013 07:33 PM
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This is the version I submitteOhNo

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And thank you
07-19-2013 07:58 PM
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(07-19-2013 07:33 PM)Rusty Shackleford link Wrote:  [Image: 39866793.jpg]
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07-19-2013 11:28 PM
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Yyyeah!
07-23-2013 04:34 AM
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(07-23-2013 04:34 AM)Mr.Fahrenheit link Wrote:  [Image: x6iUz1i.png]

Yyyeah!

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'MURICA

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07-23-2013 12:43 PM
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Birdie! Wedgetail eagle
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09-16-2013 01:49 AM
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Evil donut.
10-24-2013 01:41 AM
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Soon to be my cover photo!
11-06-2013 03:00 AM
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Damn, that looks really cool.
11-06-2013 03:44 AM
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The Thing!
11-06-2013 06:57 AM
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I'm trying to make a pixel art with depth of field and other visual/perceptual phenomenon like reflections on the rainy street and the glows around the lights.

Its basically a city street at night in the rain.
11-24-2013 10:27 PM
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Something about the spacing/distance between those streetlights looks off to me. I think the rear two rows lights are fine, but I can't tell for sure without opening up an image editing program. I like the color choices.

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11-27-2013 08:40 AM
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Was Mr. Fahrenheit featured on an AndroidArts's pixel art tutorial, along with DawnBringer himself?

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01-26-2015 05:17 PM
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Unfortunately, yes, though I am now ashamed of that shitty attempt I made haha.
01-26-2015 07:39 PM
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lel true this looks dim compared to your current art

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01-27-2015 01:29 PM
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