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some picture army or something
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some picture army or something

Sup, been working on this for the past few days, looking for some feedback!  :tophat:

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04-02-2012 04:22 PM
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Re: some picture army or something

Wut.
04-02-2012 04:23 PM
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Re: some picture army or something

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[center]The being known as &quot;Optimus Lime&quot; or, simply, &quot;Optimus&quot;[/center]<br />[center]When life gives you lemons, squeeze them in someone else's eye.[/center]
04-02-2012 07:39 PM
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Re: some picture army or something

(04-02-2012 07:39 PM)Optimus link Wrote:  [Image: eb6.jpg?1307463786]
I'm guessing you didn't like my creation? OhNo)';
04-02-2012 08:19 PM
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Re: some picture army or something

It's like Sweet Bro + Hella Jeff, but a P.W army instead

o.o
04-02-2012 08:38 PM
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Re: some picture army or something

Wrong perspective. you have to see a 3/4 view of the character. for example [Image: 02b15f4988.png]

see how the characters are looking to right as if something is there. thats how you want yours to look.

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04-03-2012 12:39 AM
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(04-02-2012 07:39 PM)Optimus link Wrote:  *snip*

There's no reason to be a dick. They may not be perfect, but we all started somewhere, heck, my first few sprites were a few times worse than these.

Now, crit.
As The-Cod said, you'll want to tilt your little blokes to a more 3/4 perspective, otherwise it looks slightly weird in a match. As pretty much all the other armies do that.
Your guys also don't have much shading. You'll want to have about 3 shades, or even just 2, of each colour upon your sprites. Also, you may want to use colours other than the base paint ones, as they are very "neon" and don't look good on physical sprites. However, they look perfect on electricity, light, energy etc.
More crit when you do some more work! :3

I am prone to fits of inactivity, sadly. If I suddeny stop posting, it is NOT because I have left the forum, but because my internet is taking a little hike. I will post back into our match when I can, and assuming you want to continue, we can try to finish up. Please just keep this in mind if you get into a match with me.
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04-03-2012 10:41 AM
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Re: some picture army or something

Can we stop quoting massive pictures, please.
04-03-2012 11:00 AM
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(04-03-2012 11:00 AM)SuperChocobo link Wrote:  Can we stop quoting massive pictures, please.
Without spoilers that is.

SPRITE FASTER, COLOUR HARDER, PARTICLE OSCILLATE WITH AGILITY.
04-03-2012 11:08 AM
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(04-03-2012 10:41 AM)PIN link Wrote:  There's no reason to be a dick. They may not be perfect, but we all started somewhere, heck, my first few sprites were a few times worse than these.
Erm, I think my image explains what I was thinking -- I didn't know if he was joking or not.

NOW
Just read what Pin said, he said it perfectly.

[center]The being known as &quot;Optimus Lime&quot; or, simply, &quot;Optimus&quot;[/center]<br />[center]When life gives you lemons, squeeze them in someone else's eye.[/center]
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Re: some picture army or something

I think that's a good idea for an army of people from the late eighteenth / nineteenth century, although armed with technologies beyond those times, probably by some other source of energy (I see the matches as all use oil, and in the resources tab PictureWiki I saw the word "energy jelly" : |. Probably only uses it stomponk). Boy, you do well buddies turn your character like in the game such as Super Mario, or see the other armies, shading, take care of the army is over, you will have all positive because it is very much changing. Here I put a version of your army.
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07-05-2012 10:45 AM
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Re: some picture army or something

I'm pretty sure your version is just an edit of one of Mirokan or Stefman's armies, and that the effects and circle thing are just copy-pasted from somewhere else.

[center]The being known as &quot;Optimus Lime&quot; or, simply, &quot;Optimus&quot;[/center]<br />[center]When life gives you lemons, squeeze them in someone else's eye.[/center]
07-05-2012 02:49 PM
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As far as I could remember, none of these sprites are seem to be edit of anything I made before.

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(04-02-2012 08:38 PM)Kwigg link Wrote:  It's like Sweet Bro + Hella Jeff, but a P.W army instead

o.o
Sweet Picture and Hella Wars
07-05-2012 06:51 PM
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I think those new human fellas are edits of my old dudes.

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07-05-2012 11:19 PM
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I'm coming out of retirement and I come back to this?
07-06-2012 04:46 AM
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Re: some picture army or something

Just helping a friend, showing how you can make it better, I admit that I stole balls, Dwarves necromancer.
Because i can not do even effects. ;_;
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Did you just MSPaint a troll face for this
07-06-2012 01:22 PM
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How does that even fit with your comment
07-06-2012 01:22 PM
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Re: some picture army or something

You'll notice that this thread is pretty old, why is it even still being discussed.

[center]The being known as &quot;Optimus Lime&quot; or, simply, &quot;Optimus&quot;[/center]<br />[center]When life gives you lemons, squeeze them in someone else's eye.[/center]
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Stomponk still alive? People he has only two posts to the discussion is not even looked not spoken anywhere, and his army "some picture or SMOETHINK army" consists of poses performed by a seven-year newet my army sucks, but I working on it!
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(07-06-2012 02:01 PM)Optimus link Wrote:  You'll notice that this thread is pretty old, why is it even still being discussed.

Because the author bumped it with new content.

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07-07-2012 11:11 AM
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(07-07-2012 11:11 AM)Xron link Wrote:  Because the author bumped it with new content.

You'll soon notice that he's not the author. But someone providing un-readable C&C.

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And hand drawing(?) ragefaces.

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(07-07-2012 11:18 AM)Jafhar link Wrote:  You'll soon notice that he's not the author. But someone providing un-readable C&C.

Wow, I did not see that.

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